The baby looked upon the white snail slowly making its way out of her grasp. The pupils of her blue eyes dilated as the snail picked up its speed. It seemed to move much faster than those little black coloured four legged creatures that she was fond of teasing. This was giving her much more of a challenge. She lunged as the snail seemed to disappear behind the small green rock. Tufts of her golden hair now shrouded her blue glaring eyes. She gave a loud puff and started crawling slowly towards the green rock. She looked over the rock slowly making sure not to alarm the white snail. The white snail was quivering in fear hoping the baby didn’t find him. Her hands closed in on her unknowing pray when suddenly a hand grabbed her. It was the entity that she was supposed to call ‘Mother’ babbling in her silly tongue. From what she understood, from all those silly blabbering it was time for her nap. She would come back later and the white snail better be ready. The white snail gave a smug smile and started it’s descent into the green pastures below.
October 17, 2007 at 2:06 pm
Well, thats what happens when you leave babies out in the garden, they all go Stewie on you =)
October 18, 2007 at 11:17 am
o.o super snail! reminds me of the super fast turtle in swan princess.
October 19, 2007 at 1:17 pm
awesome description sppppooooky!!
October 20, 2007 at 1:56 pm
I wanna b the babblin mommy who picks up the baby!! Tht lil baby is described sooo perfectly, I can almost smell her sweet baby smell and hear her lil happy gurgles and thingies… Fab writin mwaaail.. mwahz.. xx
January 25, 2008 at 5:55 am
beautifully written~! how come i didn’t see this post before?