the white snail and the blue eyed baby

By maail

The baby looked upon the white snail slowly making its way out of her grasp. The pupils of her blue eyes dilated as the snail picked up its speed. It seemed to move much faster than those little black coloured four legged creatures that she was fond of teasing. This was giving her much more of a challenge. She lunged as the snail seemed to disappear behind the small green rock. Tufts of her golden hair now shrouded her blue glaring eyes. She gave a loud puff and started crawling slowly towards the green rock. She looked over the rock slowly making sure not to alarm the white snail. The white snail was quivering in fear hoping the baby didn’t find him. Her hands closed in on her unknowing pray when suddenly a hand grabbed her. It was the entity that she was supposed to call ‘Mother’ babbling in her silly tongue. From what she understood, from all those silly blabbering it was time for her nap. She would come back later and the white snail better be ready. The white snail gave a smug smile and started it’s descent into the green pastures below.

5 Responses to “the white snail and the blue eyed baby”

  1. velvette Says:

    Well, thats what happens when you leave babies out in the garden, they all go Stewie on you =)

  2. bulhaa Says:

    o.o super snail! reminds me of the super fast turtle in swan princess.

  3. i - k k o Says:

    awesome description sppppooooky!!

  4. yumma Says:

    I wanna b the babblin mommy who picks up the baby!! Tht lil baby is described sooo perfectly, I can almost smell her sweet baby smell and hear her lil happy gurgles and thingies… Fab writin mwaaail.. mwahz.. xx

  5. shums Says:

    beautifully written~! how come i didn’t see this post before?

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